My three final pieces
Initially, I struggled with this brief as I felt that I could only create really obvious suggestions in response to the word 'light'. However after doing some research I was able to come up with some more sufficient ideas.
As I am eager to try out new techniques, I had a go at paper cutting in my roughs and decided to continue with this process in my final pieces. I tried to simplify the ideas but portray them effectively, although I actually managed to finish the pieces relatively quickly which made me wonder whether or not I had rushed them a little and could have spent more time and delicacy in the craft.
Peer Review
I agreed with the majority of my feedback. It was extremely fair, giving me points of constructive criticism as well as praise.
The negative points include 'neater craft lines'; I did find it a little difficult as I was cutting through card, although next time I guess I could change my craft blade more frequently for a higher level of precision. Also, that I could have put more detail into the image as it looks a little bit rushed, which I completely agree with. I need to get out of the habit of panicking about finishing my work on time! Some people commented on the use of silver pen; I used it to add highlights and detail to contrast with the black and silver, but some people said I could have established it more and made more of a statement with it. Maybe I could have used a thicker pen to do so. Finally, one of the comments stated confusion of the lightbulb and globe image. The process is explained via my rough sketches with the initial idea of 'let there be light' and our societies dependence on electricity, however I understand that this might not be as clear without the text. Although I thought it would be more appropriate to use the text with the timeline image to communicate the purpose more clearly.
The positive comments praised the use of two tone contrasting colours working really well together, and as a series which I was happy with, as I have struggled previously to make images work well as a set. There were also comments about the concept and ideas being clever and unique, as well as 'perfect consistency', which I was really happy to hear. I can take this positive feedback and continue to develop on the things I have achieved in further briefs.
Self Evaluation- Studio Brief 3
I think I've applied my media relatively well considering that I've tried and pursued the process of paper cutting that I'm not too familiar with. I tried to apply the media simplistically yet effectively, using two bold, contrasting colours; black and yellow to symbolise the contrast between light and dark.
My rough sketches were an essential part of my developmental process, they allowed me to figure out the dimensions I had to work in (A3). I wasn't used to working on a scale as large as this so this was useful to try out drawing in this frame to gain accurate composition. My strengths lie within coming up with clever concepts and communicating them clearly. However one of my major weaknesses is stressing too much about actually completing all of my work on time and a result of this is rushing the process of making the product. This is a negative shortcut that I need to stop carrying out if I want the quality of my work to increase in future due to spending more time paying attention to detail.
In conclusion, I have produced a clear communicating set of images in relation to the word 'light' using bold colours and shapes in paper craft form. I came up with my ideas quickly, and pursued with the final images very quickly without considering any other form of media. Although I'm really happy with the outcome, my ideas and thought processes, as well as the crafting itself could have been a lot more detailed and exhaustive, which could have resulted in a higher quality of final image.
In future, I will take more time and be more attentive when completing a brief. I will also take forward some of the positive attributes I have gained in this brief such as producing images that work well in a set and ideas that illustrate the concept in a clear and clever way.